The story of Mr. Renhe Ren [my entry to Finish the Story Contest - Week #44!]

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This is my entry to @bananafish contest Finish the Story Contest - Week #44.


The story of Mr. Renhe Ren

by @marcoriccardi


It is said that Mr. Renhe Ren, of Daochu village, in the province of Quan Shijie, in his forty-second year of life, was seized by a great rage because of his long-standing enemy, who was constantly working to hinder and ruin any of his activities and projects. Faced with the umpteenth abuse, Mr. Renhe Ren felt that his harmony and self-control were going to be lost. He was no longer able to feel the noble sentiments worthy of a superior man.

Then he remembered the words of the wise man. "Sit down along the river bank and wait, sooner or later you will see the corpse of your enemy pass". So, he left the village of Daochu and went down to the river. He found a willow with a wide foliage that bent gently over the water, and sat down in his shadow, determined to wait until the wisdom of the ancestors had brought a solution to his problem.

He awaited for days and nights, meditating. Sun, rain, wind and fog alternated tormenting him, but neither the heat, nor the cold, nor the humidity, nor the insects distracted him from his waiting. Time passed, until one day in late autumn, the stream swollen for the rains brought a corpse to its feet, face down. Mr. Renhe Ren shook himself from his meditation and leaned towards the muddy water, his heart finally calm.

Great was his surprise when he saw…

My ending:


...the face of Govanko Strvina, his enemy. The wise man was right. Waiting was worth it. Mr. Renhe Ren took a look around to see is there some prospective witnesses. No one was there. He pushed the corpse back to the river and erased every single trace of his presence. He looked around one more time to be sure that there was no one who saw him. There was an ugly old woman standing on the river surface. But she disappeared just after Mr. Renhe Ren blinked. It was great relief when he released that an old woman was just phantasm.

Yet next day, all Mr. Renhe Ren's jobs went better. But, soon after police inspectors knocked at his door. Mr. Renhe Ren was under suspicion of murder Mr. Govanko Strvina. Acquaintances of Mr. Ren and Mr. Strvina told to the police about their relation. So the police was in the belief that Mr. Renhe Ren had had a good reason to kill Mr. Govanko Strvina. But Mr. Ren had had a good alibi. He was sitting under a willow, and he hasn't seen anything strange. Forensics have found that Mr. Govanko Strvina was pushed out of bridge by a person whose identity doesn't appropriate to Mr. Renhe Ren. And all witnesses agree that Mr. Renhe Ren hasn't been close to the place of the accident. So Mr. Renhe Ren was acquitted.

The business of Mr. Renhe Ren has crossed the border of the province Quan Shijie. After a long time he could satisfy his wife, and to enjoy the company of his children. Finally, Mr. Renhe Ren was happy.

But not for a long. Mr. Renhe Ren had a strange dream. He dreamed a strong bumptious man with a golden beard. In one hand he held an axe and thunder lights in the other. "Now it's time for you to pay," said the golden-bearded man. Then, an ugly old woman he saw on the river surface came into his dream. Soon after, he found out that his older child is a junky, and younger one has died after a short aggressive sickness.

Although his business was in progressed, Mr. Renhe Ren has felt void deep inside of his soul. At once, the way drove him to the willow under which he was waiting for the corpse of his enemy. There he saw the wise man again. "Everything has a price. And every price has an interest." Said the wise man. "Death has to be paid by death. Drug addiction is the interest." Mr. Renhe Ren said nothing, just looked to the ground.

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